im at uni and do english, ive wrote 5 novels this is my 6th one plz tell me what you think about it?
May 26th, 2009 | 
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Pinda S asked:
this is only 1st chapter and bit of 2nd chapter im going to aim for 80 to 90 chapters to finish novel
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I’m afraid that your spelling, sentence structure, grammar, and use of language are so poor that I struggled to get through the first section and couldn’t be bothered doing the work necessary to read any further. You might have a good concept there, but you need a lot of work on your language skills before you can get it across to anyone reading it. You say you’re in university? This would have failed badly in my grade 9 English class.
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The way you have written your question causes me to doubt that you are at uni; however that doesn’t mean that you haven’t written several novels.
So, that aside, I think your writing has some heft to it, but that it is compromised by your lack of technical skill. You have some good ideas for plot and character, but you haven’t yet learned how to develop them (you are simply STATING, instead of DEVELOPING).
That said, I hope you will not give up. Just realize that good writing takes more than story ideas and the discipline to write it out (although those are very important — and you are ahead of many people when it comes to that). You now have to study the craft. Work on your grammar, syntax, character development, and plotting techniques.
You not only have to write a good novel, you want to get it published. Editors will only read so far into a text. If you don’t know the basics of good writing (including all the rules for grammar, punctuation, etc.), they just stop reading.
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My University wouldn’t have accepted your grammar for a science degree, so lord knows what sort of English you learn there…….
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who would actually read all of that. it’s probally a load of rubbish.
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You need to correct and improve your spelling and grammar.
Also the fight in Manila was a thriller not a gorilla.
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well, we have different tastes in just about everything
keep the spirit?
i mean the other spirit…