A new poem- “Friendship”?
Tricia asked:
The title leaves a bit to be desired, but…
What do you think of this poem- and by that, I mean, how do you interpret it? What does it bring to mind? Perhaps tell me about the atmosphere it seems to create, if it gets the point across well.
I am eager for feedback.
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Friendship is the brightest day
with a softer, sweeter light,
a gift, to be held dear-
She, accustomed to the night
in utter isolation, dies,
all for her heart, so filled with the fear
that a tormenting sun would burn her eyes-
and leave her blind to love.
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To me this poem sends mixed emotions. The top your talking about friendship and then in the second half it feels more like you are describing someone that was in love and had her heart broken. Don’t know if that is what you were aiming for?